The next step to think about when doing this overheard pieces is the sentences themselves. A previous discussion I had before was that some of the sentences worked much better than the others. The reason being that some of the sentences were closed and meant that they weren't open for interpretation.
So this time round I decided to choose each sentence and edit it in order to keep them open. For example instead of being written down as "you can go down that arcade there by the ally way," to "you can go." That is just one example, simply by taking away some words I have completely changed the meaning. This requires more work, but is getting there.
Final Piece
